Thread:Pigboy24/@comment-4860183-20150701214431

So here's what I've been thinking so far:


 * When the film's logo comes up, I think it should have the purple  "Lock Evolution" logo fades in, and after 1 to 2 seconds, the orange "Evolved" slides in really dramatically and also have the outline of it shines like in sharp stuff. After a few seconds, it fades out and then the movie continues as follows.


 * I added in the parts during the concert hall scene. Here is my edited expanded version of the transcript:

SpongeBob: OK guys, we're on in five minutes! (Patrick enters the scene) Patrick, is your voice ready to sing?

Patrick: You bet it is! ♪ Da da da dee da da dum da da dee dum! ♪

SpongeBob: Patrick, we're not singing blue.

Patrick: Ok, but what's is the category then?

SpongeBob: It's in a happy tone and we kinda sung it in one of the episodes.

Patrick: What episode?

(SpongeBob was about to say the episode's name when the rest of the band comes in scene)

Squidward: Are we ready for the concert? I can't wait for the fans in New Kelp City to see what I had this time!

SpongeBob: OK. Just to let you know, the performance doesn't have to be perfect, but not really weird that it takes our fans away.

Sandy: SpongeBob! You know that this is not just a regular concert, it is a world tour!

Patrick: What's a world tour?

Plankton: It's when we perform in different states. Right now, we are about to perform in a city, and this cannot be ruined.

Mr. Krabs: Well, me forced ye to not have your hands on me Krabby Patty secret forumla, so that is why me took ye with us.

Plankton: Seriously???

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 * So here is my first update on the movie's transcript. Hope sure you approve the changes I did!

  